Thursday, January 17, 2013

Keep your enemies close

An hour ago: Chloe comes home from work early, she's on the phone with someone. I'm in my room with my door closed, she throws her coat on the floor (I can hear by the sound it makes when it falls it's her Jil Sander), kicks off her shoes and stumbles on the words as she speaks. She's shaken up, "I'm not coming back" she says with a broken voice, then shuts her bedroom door behind her and throws herself on the bed.

Just now: her naked footsteps on the hallway marble, she picks up her coat, walks into the kitchen and leaves the water running for what seems like forever. She stops outside my room, I hold my breath and wait for her to knock but she never does. The silence is thicker than blood.






45 comments:

  1. Something was wrong today. Oh, it was; oh, I knew it.

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  2. keep ur enemies close how true is that....

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  3. Thank u for you comment, love your blog so touching! Will be happy to follow! X

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  4. beautiful writing. thanks for the comment. i'd love it if we followed each other.

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  5. there are just days like that. when everyone seems to be your enemy.. when you don't feel like doing anything but cry. cry out of madness and anger.

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  6. beautyfull photos! i really like it!!!

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  7. Nice post, nice photos and words!

    Thanks for visiting my blog, loved to know yours, I'm now following!

    xoxo
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  8. amazing photos :)
    <3
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  9. Hey, thanks for the comment you left on my dip dye post. Yeah I'd love to follow your blog if you'd follow back?

    Love your blog and especially the title haha! ]
    Much love, x

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  10. The suspense..
    Beautiful, as always.

    xx
    Lulu
    Breakfast After 10

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  11. your blog domain screams "PLEASE VIEW THIS BLOG!!"
    i view it! LOVE it!
    i'm sooo gonna follow you!

    it'll be an honour if you follow back!

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  12. I'm so intrigued! Thanks for visiting my blog and recommending we follow each other, following you now!

    xoxo,

    Laura
    http://miss-beanie.blogspot.com

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  13. Your writing is so lovely! Just stumbled upon your blog and I'm captivated...
    Your newest follower <3

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  14. of course i follow your blog! i'm doing this with a pleasure :)

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  15. Hello dear! Yes, of course! I would love to follow each other! I am following now, hope you will do the same. I am wainting on my blog. Kisses !

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  16. Great prose. Haven't seen any blog like yours - followed!

    gz x
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  17. As good as you always do. Can I ask you a favor? Could you check out my blog and tell me what you think about today's post?
    Thank you so much! ;)
    Kiss

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  18. Love it! :)
    xx
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  19. Hello dear! :) Such a nice blog you have. I am your new follower now, hope you follow back.. (?)

    Keep in touch :*

    Your Elizabeth http://elizabethlore.blogspot.cz/

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  20. Hello dear!
    i did not know your blog, it's great!
    you have a new follower, follow me back?

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  21. Wow, what beautiful photos and lovely writing- so interesting! Sure, I'd love to follow each other<3

    Greta xoxo
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  22. The last picture is absolutely one of my favorite pictures of the year so far :)
    Beautiful!!!

    xx

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  23. Lovely post! love the picture and the way you write!

    I'm following you now on bloglovin and GFC! Hope you follow me back :)

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  24. love the post and oh your blog name very interesting lol thanks for visiting my blog and for the lovely comment following you now. hope you could follow me back too on GFC =) thanks
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  25. Hello! I came across your blog and I'm loving it! Would you like to follow each other? Let me know in my blog and I'll follow you back :) XXX

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  26. This title is so true!! nice blog

    Would you like to follow each other? I've just followed you :))

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  27. I hope she's fine!
    Really like the pictures you included here. Reflects the mood of your writing.

    Love,
    Jolien

    http://julianaandthedaydream.blogspot.be

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  28. I'm ur new follower hope u will like my blog too!

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  29. Hi Avy, love your stories! Thanks for visiting my blog,, following you now :) x

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  30. Great post!
    Would you like to follow each other? Come follow me and I’ll follow back for sure!
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  31. Hello, you visited just my blog so I came to check out yours. You write really well. Waiting for your next post!
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  32. Followed you back! Great post!!
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    xx

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  33. Hi Avy, I've been following your blog for quite a while :P
    xxx

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  34. Come follow me on Bloglovin or give me a like and comment on Facebook! Thanks :-)

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  35. Thank you for visiting our blog & following!!! I am following you back now XOXO

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  36. I am really digging your tone. I need to read more to get the fuller picture but this is not a OOTD blog, in the best possible way.

    amanda
    http://thingstoholdandstir.blogspot.com/

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  37. Hi (^-^)v
    I saw your comment on my blog just now, thank you ~♥
    I followed you, your blog is really awesome !
    And your pictures are really great *-*
    Have a great day ♥

    Miss Neko
    http://www.missxneko.blogspot.de/

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  38. Beautiful as always Avy, I hope you are keeping your promise and writing a book. Much love, Katie.
    http://whispsofgypsy.blogspot.com/

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  39. Thanks so much for stopping by my blog. I'm looking forward to reading your blog. It all looks so great! I'm following you now. Follow back doll.

    xo, Gina

    http://beautyloveandlipgloss.blogspot.com/

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